Expanded feedback below:
Areas of strengths based on presenting to Sheffield Live!
Stevlar was pleased with our pitch. Our skills in presenting
were clear and precise. When asked about our pitch we answered firmly and to
the point. He particularly liked Quizzical and felt that it that it showed the
most potential as our final product. Though similar products were compared
overall the product pleased him and we were urged to pick this as our product
to be created.
Areas for improvements based on Sheffield Live! Feedback
and addressing issues.
Stevlar felt that our first idea The Daily Life Of was a “Huge
marketing campaign” and lacked subtlety to this.
To improve upon this the marketing of the product for
future reference should focus on the benefits and unique appeal of the product and
how it benefits the community.
Stevlar also felt that the time frame of 20 minutes was
unrealistic and needed to be longer. As if adverts were used to fill the gap
they would drag on and general does not follow radio conventions.
To improve upon this the show would need to be extended
to around 30 minutes instead. This would mean that we would be able to feature
more topics that can be covered in the show and generally more content.
Reflection
Though Quizzical was the favoured choice both ideas were
liked by Stevlar; who made comparison to other products and showed a keen
interest in the products. The game show style is something he said himself he
had worked with and demonstrated knowledge within the area, he liked the
inclusion of local guests that had meaning within the community and our future
ambitions for the show, that were not dismissed as unrealistic.
He found problems within The Daily Life of, but did not
criticise it any further and did not dismiss the idea completely. Overall both
products were well received but not equally.
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